This paper shows how a story can be put out there and then different people can have different views on it. Then it can turn into a battle between 2 people back and forth on their shows.
Strengths: Good introduction. You also connected things nicely and had good uses with the quotes.
Weaknesses: I feel like it was just a little too much saying step by step what happened and not enough personal opinion and what you think about the story.
Additional Comments: Good paper with strong intro. Just needs a little more personal opinion.
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